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NEW POEM BY DARTHMAT! YAY!

Educational Spirit

Independence won’t be found in the lesson plan here
To those in charge you must listen, obey, and fear

Silencing my voice by choking me with lies
All I can do is tear as you feed off of my cries

Now that my voice has been stolen and torn apart
All of my pleas for fairness and honesty now depart

Now in your mind you have only your own self serving views
You are in denial so you feel no guilt while you scar and bruise

You demand our respect while you don’t give us yours
You laugh while we struggle in our own personal wars

You have fun tearing our aspirations to shreds
We try to fight as your venomous deceit spreads

I refuse to surrender to this terrible selected fate
Even as you lash out at me with your undying hate
I highly suggest Mobb Deep's albums The Infamous and Hell on Earth, if you have not listened to it yet.
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hope u guys like it
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Awesome! The only thing I can complain about is the amount of syllables per line. It sounds a bit forced instead of flowing.
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thank u for your crt\iticsm that is my weakst part wenever i rite poetry
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ya ur rite, matthew it is ur weak point but ur still good with it, nice poem, luv it
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nice quote also
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tahnks cryp(t keeper) dont call me by my real name either mat or darth or darthmat!
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and thanks for the nice quote comment
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i would be surprised by taht profile but i heard it all before (even if it ausome)
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k, lol, how do u get a thingy under youe name? like urs is rebel? i no im ignorant just shut up about it
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under preferences hit no to hide online status (site mod means yur like inc charge of stuff and admin- souls riser (creater of site)- is the top dog we r but lowly rebels
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hello?
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cryptevah72 Wrote:hello?
? i just told u
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oh thanx guys sry im out of it
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Humanity’s Future

By me

Tears of blood
Screams of pain
Washed away
By acid rain

Wires protruding
From my brain
The doctors and scientists
All insane

I sit here
Strapped to my chair
No one around me
Seems to care

Staring out the window
I shake in terror
This entire scene
God’s greatest error

Smoke stacks spewing
Clouds of smog
Smothering the planet
In chemical fog

No more trees
Animals extinct
Individual cries
All indistinct

Gears go grinding
Crushing hope and bones
Perpetually filling the silence
With an apathetic drone

Windows barred
Doors blockaded
Useless against
Being invaded

By mechanical monsters
With teeth of steal
They dull them to bring
The pain that many feel


Unsafe to go out
In the air tinted red
With the pollution of factories
And the blood of the dead

And now they close in
With their scalpels and suture
As I stare out sadly
At humanity’s future

ok thats one of mine so if you steal it, i will rip out you intestines and hang you by them.
Smile Evil
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like it?
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darthmat Wrote:tahnks cryp(t keeper) dont call me by my real name either mat or darth or darthmat!

Don't worry bout it. Most the people on this forum know eachother's names. It's like a big family here. Smile

By the way, aweosme poems. Could delete a few syllibles, but great nontheless.
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u no i love it already
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just a question, how do you two know eachother?
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same school..i t's hell there
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i no my comment is way late but its not hell, hell is something that at least satinists (and me) look foward to, school (particularily our school) is a fate much worse. i cant really explain it but if you ever get unexplainable chills, its probabley your sub-concious trying to erase the memory of torture. i swear some of the teachers are deseased spirits comeback to haunt us, really i have proof, one of their rooms is even a cold spot, and she can find things.... no matter where you hide them. Evil
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umm.. okay.. which teahcer r u talking about?
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who do you think? ISREAL! (oh no, i spelled her name! now i shall surly be cursed!) lol
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