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Anti-school poem. Would appreciate thoughts.
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Anti-school poem. Would appreciate thoughts.

I act like an old fart, saying I'm smart enough to have an opinion,
When I'm just a kid, shopping for sweet tarts at K-mart, still a trillion years away from maturity,
Gradually, they wash my brain and tell me what to do, whose train to jump on, what views to see,
What a man I'll be, if I be what they want, if I'll be in their line of robots.
But if I can't stand it, and I rant about it, post up the poster and revolt,
Strap myself with a revolver, postpone my death so I can spit the words of freedom, they'll have to resort
To shooting me, but since I didn't pussy out across the sea, you'll look and see, and they'll be losing ye.

I remember I used to sit bored for hours and dream of having super-powers,
I was back to reality when the fucking teacher made me to pay attention, threatened me, telling me he was up in the towers,
And I was at the bottom, and he looked down at me, exposed at his feet.
And if I wanted to survive, I was supposed to grin wide and expose those teeth,
'Sure, all's all right, I'm hanging in tight, no worries, ma, I'll go to collegde, I won't retreat.'
While I was sitting at night, razor to my wrists, wind whistling outside through the willows,
It billowed, and I cried in my pillow,
I dreamt of success and was ready to pay the fees, I was tired of kneeling at someone else's knees,
I wanted to live next to all the seas, in a queit cabin by an elm tree,
Hoping these planted seeds of oppresion ought to sprout to rebellion and free me.
I hoped to escape school and leave a friend a postcard, saying "if you get out, go to the carribean and see me."


Crime: birth
Sentence: 12 years incarceration and humiliation
Location: Prison with great public relations
Whenever a kid goes to hell, parents make a great sensation
Of the kid learning about chemical reaction and other earthly creation
But not learning tax evasion and about our nation,
And through our inaction, this crooked system will continue,
Kids will be tormented sentimentally while you twidle your thumb.
The total sum of this destruction is a brain dead generation.

I wake up dazed, in my morning haze, and when I say I'm too tired, they say I'm just lazy.
When I was up all night, doing homework and dreading school, this is driving me crazy.
Fuck this shit now; here's the work, bitch, it was a synch, I didn't give a fuck: done it in fifteen seconds on recess.
Yeah, I smoke cess, and get myself some overdue rest, get a break from this fuck-fest.
Fuck the next lesson, I'll pass the test guessin',
I spend the next detention messin'.
I'll stop stressin' out, I won't end up a failure if I don't give up my life for something I don't care about.
Yeah, teacher, honk your fucking snout,
Scream all you want, won't stopping me from doing what I want,



You fucking lout. Lousy conformist cunt, contorting young minds into conformist, getting conformed and promsing never to have fun. Sunuvabitch. Fuck that, I'll follow my dream even if I don't rich. Or any dough at all. Fuck you all, I'll prove I can stand tall and yell "FUCK SCHOOL, THIS LOUSY WORLD, AND FUCK YOU TO, PHONY CUNT."

"Then it was straight to the 40 ouncers/ slapping teachers and jacking off in front of my counselors." As the World Turns - Eminem.

"A man is a success if gets up in the morning and gets to bed at night, and in between does whatever he does what he wants to do." - Bob Dylan.

"A good artist should be isolated. If he isn't isolated, something is wrong." - Orson Welles.

"That is not dead which can eternal lie, and with strange eons, even death may die." - H.P. Lovecraft.

"I became insane, with long intervals of painful sanity." Edgar Allan Poe.
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cool(ALSO DOUBLEPOST FOR SOME REASON)

their pee should hv been shot out like a ki blast breaking the rocks

oh and also No one has any rights. We're free, rights create invisible restrictions. But we live in a society where the majority accepts rights to be true.
05-03-2017 06:06 AM
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Yeah, original artwork/writing does that sometimes to me. I don't know why.

"Then it was straight to the 40 ouncers/ slapping teachers and jacking off in front of my counselors." As the World Turns - Eminem.

"A man is a success if gets up in the morning and gets to bed at night, and in between does whatever he does what he wants to do." - Bob Dylan.

"A good artist should be isolated. If he isn't isolated, something is wrong." - Orson Welles.

"That is not dead which can eternal lie, and with strange eons, even death may die." - H.P. Lovecraft.

"I became insane, with long intervals of painful sanity." Edgar Allan Poe.
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Probably some glitch

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