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some poetry/song i wrote
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some poetry/song i wrote


they said
loneliness is best
i sometimes believe them

but it's a catch
not always heaven
knowing you're
the only one

they said
put your trust there into others
i did
look where i am

not always best
to know who you are
sometimes it feels worse
to understand and
preserve your scars

not always good to look
at the stars
you wonder about heavens
and you go back to the start
of being alone
of feeling on your own

they see
i fall back into pieces
no matter so you
turn around again

they hear
a soft voice in the distance
i may need help but it don't matter
because i'm on my own

i'm on my own

i'm on my own

and it's too late now


i have better poems lemme find

"In school, you're taught a lesson and then given a test. In life, you're given a test that teaches you a lesson.” -Tom Bodett


I'm a teen girl who radically despises school for being the way it is. I'm also a poet/writer/artist. i couldn't decide on one thing.

wow ethan great moves keep it up proud of you


https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL...tVd-9qr4Hk i suggest you look at this
03-14-2017 12:08 PM
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some poetry/song i wrote

Smile hey thats pretty good
is this how you feel?
03-14-2017 12:16 PM
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some poetry/song i wrote

here's a better one

Quote:i don't care what you're saying
as long as you turn my way

still i'm here to stay
but i'll leave you any day

i don't see why you still care
i doubt you in every way

still i'm here to stay
but destruction's on its way

i live off of all your love
you give me every day

i wish i could say the same
every day you just seem strained

but i'm still scared to lose you
and i'm sure you feel the same

because i love you either way

i still send out this cry for help
that on attention i still prey

i'm scared to lose you so i stay
but do you feel the same?

maybe i'm just lonely
and too far my thoughts will stray

but i want you here with me
because each day i feel lonely.

(03-14-2017 12:16 PM)Uryitiogi Wrote:  Smile hey thats pretty good
is this how you feel?

thanks! yeah p much
it feels a bit tumblr to me tho so i'm trying to write a better version of it though.

(03-14-2017 12:16 PM)Uryitiogi Wrote:  Smile hey thats pretty good
is this how you feel?

thanks! yeah p much
it feels a bit tumblr to me tho so i'm trying to write a better version of it though.

"In school, you're taught a lesson and then given a test. In life, you're given a test that teaches you a lesson.” -Tom Bodett


I'm a teen girl who radically despises school for being the way it is. I'm also a poet/writer/artist. i couldn't decide on one thing.

wow ethan great moves keep it up proud of you


https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL...tVd-9qr4Hk i suggest you look at this
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some poetry/song i wrote

Sounds like Linkin Park
03-14-2017 12:21 PM
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(03-14-2017 12:21 PM)Dead Wrote:  Sounds like Linkin Park

ɔ̖̭̬̪ͅɹ̬̰͚̦̺̗̯ɐ̭̣̝̳͚͔̲ʍ̖̦̗̗͉͠ן͉̝͕̟̟ı̙͓̙̩̖͙̯u̷ͅƃ̛̠̜̖͔̺͇ ̬͚̬̹̩ı̠͎̺̖̘̞̳u͈̖͙̲͉̩̺ ̰̪̙ɯ҉̫ʎ̥͜ ̯̟͡s̶̮̤͈̮̼̹ʞ̧ı̪̖̖̲u̪


k but tbh thank you

"In school, you're taught a lesson and then given a test. In life, you're given a test that teaches you a lesson.” -Tom Bodett


I'm a teen girl who radically despises school for being the way it is. I'm also a poet/writer/artist. i couldn't decide on one thing.

wow ethan great moves keep it up proud of you


https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL...tVd-9qr4Hk i suggest you look at this
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RE: some poetry/song i wrote

(03-14-2017 12:26 PM)soli Wrote:  
(03-14-2017 12:21 PM)Dead Wrote:  Sounds like Linkin Park

ɔ̖̭̬̪ͅɹ̬̰͚̦̺̗̯ɐ̭̣̝̳͚͔̲ʍ̖̦̗̗͉͠ן͉̝͕̟̟ı̙͓̙̩̖͙̯u̷ͅƃ̛̠̜̖͔̺͇ ̬͚̬̹̩ı̠͎̺̖̘̞̳u͈̖͙̲͉̩̺ ̰̪̙ɯ҉̫ʎ̥͜ ̯̟͡s̶̮̤͈̮̼̹ʞ̧ı̪̖̖̲u̪

My computer is too shitty to display what this says

soli Wrote:k but tbh thank you

Wasn't really a compliment, but ok
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RE: some poetry/song i wrote

(03-14-2017 12:34 PM)Dead Wrote:  
(03-14-2017 12:26 PM)soli Wrote:  
(03-14-2017 12:21 PM)Dead Wrote:  Sounds like Linkin Park

ɔ̖̭̬̪ͅɹ̬̰͚̦̺̗̯ɐ̭̣̝̳͚͔̲ʍ̖̦̗̗͉͠ן͉̝͕̟̟ı̙͓̙̩̖͙̯u̷ͅƃ̛̠̜̖͔̺͇ ̬͚̬̹̩ı̠͎̺̖̘̞̳u͈̖͙̲͉̩̺ ̰̪̙ɯ҉̫ʎ̥͜ ̯̟͡s̶̮̤͈̮̼̹ʞ̧ı̪̖̖̲u̪

My computer is too shitty to display what this says

soli Wrote:k but tbh thank you

Wasn't really a compliment, but ok

it says
crawling in my skin
upside down and backwards in emo (ZALGO) font type

"In school, you're taught a lesson and then given a test. In life, you're given a test that teaches you a lesson.” -Tom Bodett


I'm a teen girl who radically despises school for being the way it is. I'm also a poet/writer/artist. i couldn't decide on one thing.

wow ethan great moves keep it up proud of you


https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL...tVd-9qr4Hk i suggest you look at this
03-14-2017 12:41 PM
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RE: some poetry/song i wrote

whats wrong with Linkin Park? also I only know one song of theirs

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