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I wasn't good enough at encouraging people to be kinder, and removing people who refuse to be kind. Encouraging people is hard, and removing people creates conflict, and I hate conflict... so that's why I wasn't better at it.

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You'll want to center "Homework Helper Thread", like so:

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[center]Homework Helper Thread[/center]

Your first full sentence is not, in fact, a full sentence. You could say "This is a thread for you guys to post any sentence(s) you may have from an essay, book report, or the like."

Your second sentence has "then" and "can" in the wrong positions. It should read as follows: "People who choose to join this thread can then correct those sentences (grammar, word choice, punctuation, etc.)." Better yet, you could add some form of clarification to indicate that the words in parentheses correspond to the formation of sentences, rather than whole sentences themselves.

I see you are using a smiley meant to denote thoughtfulness. Could you provide context for that?

You might be wondering at this point whether I am using this as an opportunity to make fun of you. I'm not; I just thought it would be funny to provide the help you've requested to the original post. Giggle

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08-30-2014 04:36 PM
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Sentences - lc11 - 08-30-2014, 03:29 PM
Sentences - Ky - 08-30-2014 04:36 PM
Sentences - Gwedin - 08-30-2014, 04:48 PM
RE: Sentences - SoulRiser - 08-31-2014, 04:26 AM
RE: Sentences - MrAnonymous - 08-31-2014, 08:38 AM
Sentences - GamerGurl - 08-31-2014, 02:47 AM
Sentences - Ky - 08-31-2014, 02:58 AM
Sentences - lc11 - 08-31-2014, 04:32 AM
Sentences - Ky - 08-31-2014, 06:40 AM
RE: Sentences - lc11 - 08-31-2014, 06:52 AM
Sentences - Ky - 08-31-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: Sentences - Gwedin - 08-31-2014, 12:07 PM
Sentences - brainiac3397 - 08-31-2014, 02:19 PM

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