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WildFire · 09-19-2006 10:43 AM

well if i reduced the print sizes to that size. no novels have pages the size of printer paper, lol. i could make a cover for it in photoshop or something, im good at art, fon's better than me, but i could draw some of the character son the front. Well its an idea so im not quite sutre yet. it really up to you.

Rebelnerd · 09-19-2006 12:02 PM

well, i don't have photoshop yet but if there was going to be a cover i'd kinda like to design it. sounds cool though, that would be awsome if we could actually do something like that... Scratchchin

WildFire · 09-19-2006 12:57 PM

Yes it would wouldnt it. Yes

**SoulRiser** · 09-20-2006 04:59 AM

that was awesome!! when i read the "THE END" i was real glad when i saw there's an epilogue... wheeeee

really, that was brilliant. everything about it rocked... now i wanna send it to people Biggrin

the whole story is 314kb of text altogether.

Stats according to EditPad:

Total: 3 files
File size: 322,303 bytes
Number of paragraphs: 1,623
Number of words: 60,338
Number of letters and digits: 249,955
Number of characters: 261,433

60 thousand words. Bigeek

permission to put the text on the site and tell people to read it? or you wanna go over it first or something?

Abandoning Ship · 09-20-2006 05:01 AM

Rebel: PUBLISH THIS AS SOON AS YOU CAAAN!

Seriously, dude, you can make good money off a story like this.

Rebelnerd · 09-20-2006 05:52 AM

yeah, you can put it on the site. but i do think i should go over it a little first, just to make sure there's no big misspellings or stuff i left out. I'll tell you when it's ready.

and thanks guys, the reviews on this site are so much better than the nitpicking crap you get at school. Biggrin

**SoulRiser** · 09-20-2006 06:24 AM

:biggrin:

i started reading part 1 again, there are actually quite a few typo's in the first part Wasntme

and also sometimes bits are kinda unclear, like the part where Joe is in the construction yard and the gym teacher yells at him, i got the impression he was far away, yet then the next line he's close enough to kick him in the balls.

in later parts you put a lot more detail in than you did in the beginning Smile

am i starting to sound like a teacher yet? Uhoh

Abandoning Ship · 09-20-2006 06:28 AM

SoulRiser Wrote::biggrin:

i started reading part 1 again, there are actually quite a few typo's in the first part

and also sometimes bits are kinda unclear, like the part where Joe is in the construction yard and the gym teacher yells at him, i got the impression he was far away, yet then the next line he's close enough to kick him in the balls.

in later parts you put a lot more detail in than you did in the beginning

am i starting to sound like a teacher yet?

SPY! WITCH! BURN THE SPYWITCH!

Rebelnerd · 09-20-2006 06:49 AM

SoulRiser Wrote::biggrin:

i started reading part 1 again, there are actually quite a few typo's in the first part

and also sometimes bits are kinda unclear, like the part where Joe is in the construction yard and the gym teacher yells at him, i got the impression he was far away, yet then the next line he's close enough to kick him in the balls.

in later parts you put a lot more detail in than you did in the beginning

am i starting to sound like a teacher yet?

yeah, i know there's a lot of typos. i was writing it really fast cause i was getting into it, and didn't notice stuff. but i copy/pasted it all to a word document and fixed most of them, i'll just send it to you when i'm done with it.

and about that, the teacher was leading a class on a run. so they were moving towards each other. it's not that big of a deal though.

and NO WITCHBURNING! if we can't trust the administrator then we can't trust anything. stop doing the damn Macarthy impression! Uhoh

xXThe Damnation ProjectXx · 09-20-2006 08:20 AM

I TOLD U TO MAKE A FUCKIN BOOK

WHERE THE FUCK IS DAT SHIT

WildFire · 09-20-2006 08:47 AM

it ahs to get approved first, and he has to do tons of paperwork to get the main attention of the publisher of his choice.

**SoulRiser** · 09-20-2006 09:21 AM

Quote:SPY! WITCH! BURN THE SPYWITCH!

* SoulRiser deletes Toucanman Mwahaha

... just kiddin ;P

Quote:yeah, i know there's a lot of typos. i was writing it really fast cause i was getting into it, and didn't notice stuff. but i copy/pasted it all to a word document and fixed most of them, i'll just send it to you when i'm done with it.

cool... just not in .doc format Razz

wordpad opens those all weird like.

Quote:and about that, the teacher was leading a class on a run. so they were moving towards each other. it's not that big of a deal though.

ah, makes more sense now. Biggrin

Quote:and NO WITCHBURNING! if we can't trust the administrator then we can't trust anything. stop doing the damn Macarthy impression!

*flies away on broom cackling happily* Evil

WildFire · 09-20-2006 09:25 AM

that freaks me out. Wtf

Abandoning Ship · 09-20-2006 09:26 AM

Quote: *flies away on broom cackling happily*

AGHHHH!!!!! -fires a machinegun into the air wildly-

WildFire · 09-20-2006 09:31 AM

*opens eyes wide open and does some hand signs to create a barrier bettween everyone here except toucan man.*

God, watch where your shooting!

Rebelnerd · 09-20-2006 10:12 AM

oh hey, there was one thing though. does anybody have any suggestions for mistakes that need to be corrected, or things that could be improved? I need some actual feedback here if i'm going to revise it for posting.

**SoulRiser** · 09-20-2006 10:26 AM

Rebelnerd Wrote:oh hey, there was one thing though. does anybody have any suggestions for mistakes that need to be corrected, or things that could be improved? I need some actual feedback here if i'm going to revise it for posting.

cool, you mean like, this is a good excuse for me to read the whole thing again? Cool

i'll do that tomorrow, and will report back with my findings Biggrin

you prefer corrections here or in PM?

Cilaos · 09-20-2006 10:29 AM

screw the book idea they should make a movie about this Evil

oh but the government wouldnt let it be released cus then to many people would see the truth Rolleyes

WildFire · 09-20-2006 11:56 AM

it could be a youtube thing exclusive to school survival.

Rebelnerd · 09-20-2006 12:06 PM

SoulRiser Wrote:i'll do that tomorrow, and will report back with my findings

you prefer corrections here or in PM?

either way's fine, whatever's easier.

and SLITZ, i don't think the government would get rid of it (look at some of the stuff out there: V for Vendetta, Faranheit 911, etc...) but can you imagine how much that would cost? all the explosions and destruction and stuff? even if it was animated it would still be really hard to do. i think it's fine as a story Yes

Cilaos · 09-22-2006 12:22 PM

then after you make a shit load off the book make a movie

Rebelnerd · 09-22-2006 12:32 PM

i dunno, this seems like it could be one of those things that could become pooular, with the author getting nothing. oh well. Biggrin

WildFire · 09-23-2006 10:48 AM

you know, you could get something if you were one of the actors. Well I dont what you look like, so how can i know if you look like one of the people.

i know, we could make a comic book series, then take each panel and make a story line, and animate it ourselves. Though it may a very crude version at first, we could always improve on the animation and sound effects and that shit. Well i dont know, it was an idea.

Rebelnerd · 09-23-2006 01:37 PM

well, i guess that would be cool. the problem is my computer sucks so i couldn't do any of the animation.

WildFire · 09-23-2006 01:38 PM

not a problem, i cant do animation either..We should draw the general characters first before doing any animation.

Rebelnerd · 09-24-2006 12:50 AM

i'll do that, i've just got to figure out how to use our new scanner. Biggrin

Demonic Pyro · 10-10-2006 05:47 AM

WOW

I just got done reading it all
I love it, everything is great Cool

Like they all said, MAKE A BOOK!
or I will Evil

Lmao I'm just playing I wouldn't do that.

I like Joe
I swear It sounds so much like me, well except for the killing part... Uhoh

but seriously, I can't talk to girls, I hate people, this world is fuc*ed up, if I had nothing to loose I'd do w/e the fuc* I want, and I am smart and resourceful.
But yeah I wouldn't be a killer, I'd just follow

WildFire · 10-10-2006 06:53 AM

well, i just got your pictures in my email and fortunatly, there wasnt a virus on them, because that usually happens when i get atached pictures an/or files. I will creat a cover and the animation will take a while, because it takes like 20 frames to lift a gun or pick the thing off a grenade or something. its pretty intricate, but well figure it out for sure. something like this will take us well about a year or so working together. Its a big project.

Rebelnerd · 10-10-2006 08:54 AM

Demonic Pyro Wrote:I like Joe
I swear It sounds so much like me, well except for the killing part...
but seriously, I can't talk to girls, I hate people, this world is fuc*ed up, if I had nothing to loose I'd do w/e the fuc* I want, and I am smart and resourceful.
But yeah I wouldn't be a killer, I'd just follow

heh, yeah i know how that feels. i based him on me, and my school experiances and fantasies about what i'd like to do (although i'm not sure i could just kill people either, unless they were trying to kill me) i guess most people here have something in common, huh?

and pyro, i'm glad my pix didn't fuck up your ocmputer. ;D i'm learning more about photoshop and stuff like that, so whatever you need me to do, just say so.

WildFire · 10-10-2006 10:50 AM

shall do. :biggrin:

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